"Hey Aashritha, someones out there waiting for you"
"for me?? who's that?"
"don't know yaar! seems like, he's been waiting for you for a long time."
"ok fine . l'll go check it out.
Just when she was about to meet the person, the bell chimed in the campus
signalling the end of the examination. Lots of students were coming out their
respective classrooms. There was all types of chatter about the examination, the
question paper, the invigilator, the girl next to....and all types of usual stuff
you encounter when the exam season comes.
She wasn't concentrating on the banter of the juniors along the way... her
thoughts were all around who might have come to meet her. She began refreshing her mind about the people she recently met or would have given an appointment to meet in the near future, but she couldn't get to her desired destination. She tried to
think about all the events happened during the recent past but in vain.
'thats fine , anyways i'm going to meet the person now, so whats the big deal',she thought to herself.
She was walking unaware of the surroundings, just then a familiar voice was
frantically calling her.
Her friend Neeraja, was waving at her furiously in order to catch her unconscious mind's attention.She came back to her senses and was looking confused.
"What happened Neeru?", she asked.
"hey ashu, our Hod sir was calling you as you were walking along the corridor and
you were like a girl possessed by some demon, walking without even looking at him.
He sent me to talk to you and asked you to come to his cabin"
"Ohh!! is it? then i should be definitely meeting him, otherwise he would be
furious upon me. Ok then thank you Neeru , I may better go to the Hod first. The
person who's waiting is anyhow waiting and he isn't much important a person than
the HEAD OF THE DEPARTMENT", she thought to herself.
Aashritha walked in to the Hod cabin and was getting nervous and sweaty. She
knocked the door and asked "May i come in sir?"
"yes, aashritha please come in. I guess you are in some kind of a problem. ok
anyways, the thing i called you for is about the Fest we are going to conduct the
next month. I want you to talk to Sanusha Madam about the events and the workshops we're going to conduct during the fest. Now you may leave the cabin."
"Sir, I am sorry for the earlier thing , and i will definitely go and meet Sanusha
mam by today evening to discuss with her about the fest."
"Its ok ma, thats fine with me. But please pay attention to your surroundings all
the time"
"thank you sir"
Aashritha came out of the HOD's cabin and was more than relieved about the
incident, but then her eagerness increased even more now about who might be the person waiting to meet her and that too at her college which was even the more
surprising.
She was walking through the corridor and was looking here and there for the
anonymous person and was shocked to see a very familiar smiling face waiting at a
distance from her.
(TO BE CONTINUED.,..)
"for me?? who's that?"
"don't know yaar! seems like, he's been waiting for you for a long time."
"ok fine . l'll go check it out.
Just when she was about to meet the person, the bell chimed in the campus
signalling the end of the examination. Lots of students were coming out their
respective classrooms. There was all types of chatter about the examination, the
question paper, the invigilator, the girl next to....and all types of usual stuff
you encounter when the exam season comes.
She wasn't concentrating on the banter of the juniors along the way... her
thoughts were all around who might have come to meet her. She began refreshing her mind about the people she recently met or would have given an appointment to meet in the near future, but she couldn't get to her desired destination. She tried to
think about all the events happened during the recent past but in vain.
'thats fine , anyways i'm going to meet the person now, so whats the big deal',she thought to herself.
She was walking unaware of the surroundings, just then a familiar voice was
frantically calling her.
Her friend Neeraja, was waving at her furiously in order to catch her unconscious mind's attention.She came back to her senses and was looking confused.
"What happened Neeru?", she asked.
"hey ashu, our Hod sir was calling you as you were walking along the corridor and
you were like a girl possessed by some demon, walking without even looking at him.
He sent me to talk to you and asked you to come to his cabin"
"Ohh!! is it? then i should be definitely meeting him, otherwise he would be
furious upon me. Ok then thank you Neeru , I may better go to the Hod first. The
person who's waiting is anyhow waiting and he isn't much important a person than
the HEAD OF THE DEPARTMENT", she thought to herself.
Aashritha walked in to the Hod cabin and was getting nervous and sweaty. She
knocked the door and asked "May i come in sir?"
"yes, aashritha please come in. I guess you are in some kind of a problem. ok
anyways, the thing i called you for is about the Fest we are going to conduct the
next month. I want you to talk to Sanusha Madam about the events and the workshops we're going to conduct during the fest. Now you may leave the cabin."
"Sir, I am sorry for the earlier thing , and i will definitely go and meet Sanusha
mam by today evening to discuss with her about the fest."
"Its ok ma, thats fine with me. But please pay attention to your surroundings all
the time"
"thank you sir"
Aashritha came out of the HOD's cabin and was more than relieved about the
incident, but then her eagerness increased even more now about who might be the person waiting to meet her and that too at her college which was even the more
surprising.
She was walking through the corridor and was looking here and there for the
anonymous person and was shocked to see a very familiar smiling face waiting at a
distance from her.
(TO BE CONTINUED.,..)
Over to you
Did I miss anything? Or any extra tips would you like to add here?
Dude!! this style of writing is very good than the previous...and use some good topic headlines instead very simple one like "AASHRITHA'S VERSION..."...it may help you to grab the attraction of more readers :-)
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